Why we should wear uniform
Some children have school uniform it is good for many reasons like they get lost but someone see’s your wearing School uniform so they will take you back to school.
Why do you think they can’t wear school uniform?
Problems
There are many differences school uniform can make, it can also solve problems like when you are not wearing school uniform it could take to long to get changed or you get lost.
Still all children should wear school uniform!
GH
I completely agree with you G.H I think all your writing is right. The right choice. I love your punctuation some how in your writing you have a way of explaining your point from.
E.P
Well Done GH!
I really do agree to where uniform!
I think you will persuade people to where uniform!
MO
This piece uses good persuasive language GH, well done.
well done GH
I’ll persuade people