Syrian War
The war has been going on for over 4 years. Many children have lost their family, friends and their school. Most have been sadly killed.
Many schools have been destroyed. UNICEF has provided schools in the refugee camps. Would you like no school? To provide to the Syrian people, you need to give to UNICEF.
Children and adults have the right to a safe environment, however many children have been badly injured because of the war. Some illnesses such as measles have been spreading.
To conclude if the war in Syria goes on, if people aren’t looked after properly, if they aren’t provided with enough food, then their lives will be miserable.
KH
Good work KH! You have edited your work well. You have picked the main points from your work in class to create a shorter but still very persuasive version of your work.
Well done K.H great work I love it I am going to ask C.H and P.T if they think that they love it to I am sure they will from E.P
Fantastic persuasive writing kh, what a great start to the year 3 blog. I can’t wait to see what else is added by year 3.
Well Done KH! I love How you set it out!
MO
I can not wait the same as you KH
From EP
I love your work
from:G.G
Well done you have put in so much information you taught me so much .I like your if,if,then senesce the best
Well done K.H.It is persuading me to help UNICEF.
Well done K.H amazing script.
TH I never thought of that now you see your point I completely agree with you
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EP
you have got lot’s of conectives I love your work well done
Really good, my grandma loved it.
SL
many children in the world had suffered from bacteria and dont get to have an education or go to school. Many people in syria have also died because their houses were destoyed and thier schools were destroyed too. ll
well done amazing work cant wait to see more from R L-C
I love your work well done your work it’s the best one I seen!